Very nicely done, I laughed quietly when I read the dragon-santa part, it was so adorable xD and I really liked 'rescuing' Rudy from the female cashier xD huh, I'm so interested in the story with the Gelos. what did he mean when he said we are marked? :0 can't wait to read more <3 but before you go and write more, get well soon and rest as much as you can <3

  Lol Vixan and his grumpy charm xD loved the little time challenges through the game, amazingly done. Can't wait to read more. 😍❤️

I love it so much, You did such an amazing job (as usual <3) Dasher and Rudy are so beautiful and wholesome :D I found a few writing mistakes:
when we meet Cupid and great him (should be cautiously) 
when Vixan sniffs on us and Rudolph tells him off (Rusolph sighs, crossing palms on his stomach,..)
When MC is with Rudolph (outside and getting protected by him: "Rudolph, wait— It's sacred. (I think you mean scared :) )
still with Rudolph: after the Gelos attack and Rudy protected us, he apologizes to us (it's alight, should be alright, right? :) )
when we help Rudolph with the black goo on his arm. (His gaze drops as he gives a doft nod. should that be a deft nod?)
when we help Rudolph with the stones: "What kind of limits? You press, curious. (there should be a quote at the end of the sentence.)
when Rudolph is bare and stretches: but leaf something for an imagination. (should be leave :) )
we get a few errors when we went to talk to Rudolph in the car:
Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>>
Error: child tag <<elseif>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
Error: child tag <<else>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>

when being with Dasher at the table in the morning (it should be bowl not ball :) )

if I find more errors or mistakes I let you know :D

ah, btw. I'm German, if you ever want me to write something in German (because MC thought that the words which where mixed with the glowing symbols were written in German) you can let me know :D

The way my jaw dropped when i saw this was a thing what the fuck! And why am i only finding out about it now?! 😭🤭 i can't wait to read this.

I loved your revamped prologue and the chapters, you did an amazing job with it :D I still in love with Dasher :'D he has such a dad vibe to him <3 protective and loving <3 and Rudy and Vixan are both so great as well :D like I said, you did an amazing job with the whole story <3 I'm looking forward to read more <3 oh, how many chapter will the story have?

 I'm looking forward to everything new and old in the story 😀 see you around the 30th and/or 31st October ❤️

That looks promising ! Can't wait for the next update

  Dasher is my all-time favourite by now, second place is Rudy xD amazing work, love it so much :'D

I loved the first chapter with Rudy xD he's such a sweet man (I assume he likes us but is still cautious what to think about us xD) awww, poor little coal monster :( even when it spit at us, I feel sad for it :( I'm looking forward to Vixan and Dasher :D

That's a wild concept. Can't wait to see the full version

 Oh my gosh, I'm totally in love with this 🥹❤️ the characters are amazing and  so endearing. I can't wait to read more of them wish you the best for the next chapter 😀💙